what i think...
If I had to rate my writing in my Extended Definition Essay from 1 to 4 I would rate it a 2.75. In the essay I did OK. Because I think my revising and editing was not bad. I mean I didn't go into it as much depth as I think I should of. But, I got the job done and well enough to where my essay made sense.
When revising my essay I took the information from Mrs. Wade and, I took the information from my peer responses from my fellow classmates. Considered their input. Wrote a new draft, read it. Then I changed it accordingly again.
In peer response groups we could improve by going more into depth of the paper. By using all the time and playing close attention. We need to work. Which means less talking among friends.
Next year when it comes to the research project. There's really nothing I would do different. Besides paying more attention to revising. Me not revising a lot was bad. But otherwise I followed directions and I was focused.
When revising my essay I took the information from Mrs. Wade and, I took the information from my peer responses from my fellow classmates. Considered their input. Wrote a new draft, read it. Then I changed it accordingly again.
In peer response groups we could improve by going more into depth of the paper. By using all the time and playing close attention. We need to work. Which means less talking among friends.
Next year when it comes to the research project. There's really nothing I would do different. Besides paying more attention to revising. Me not revising a lot was bad. But otherwise I followed directions and I was focused.